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Second ProZ.com Translation Contest 2007

ஆங்கிலம் to ரொமேனியன்


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Source text:

        The floor was of smooth, white stone; the chairs, high-backed, primitive structures, painted green: one or two heavy black ones lurking in the shade. In an arch under the dresser reposed a huge, liver-coloured bitch pointer, surrounded by a swarm of squealing puppies; and other dogs haunted other recesses.
        The apartment and furniture would have been nothing extraordinary as belonging to a homely, northern farmer, with a stubborn countenance, and stalwart limbs set out to advantage in knee-breeches and gaiters. Such an individual seated in his armchair, his mug of ale frothing on the round table before him, is to be seen in any circuit of five or six miles among these hills, if you go at the right time after dinner. But Mr. H forms a singular contrast to his abode and style of living. He is a dark-skinned gipsy in aspect, in dress and manners a gentleman: that is, as much a gentleman as many a country squire: rather slovenly, perhaps, yet not looking amiss with his negligence, because he has an erect and handsome figure; and rather morose. Possibly, some people might suspect him of a degree of underbred pride; I have a sympathetic chord within that tells me it is nothing of the sort: I know, by instinct, his reserve springs from an aversion to showy displays of feeling- to manifestations of mutual kindliness. He'll love and hate equally under cover, and esteem  it a species of impertinence to be loved or hated again. No, I'm running on too fast: I bestow my own  attributes over  liberally on him. Mr. H may have entirely dissimilar reasons for keeping his hand out of the way when he meets a would-be-acquaintance, to those which actuate me. Let me hope my constitution is almost peculiar: my dear mother used to say I should never have a comfortable home; and only last summer I proved myself perfectly unworthy of one.


Entry #686 - Points: 0
Anonymous
        Pardoseala era din piatră albă şi netedă; scaunele, cu spătar înalt, construite simplu, spoite cu verde: vreo două mari şi negre zăceau în întuneric. Într-o arcadă, sub comodă, şedea o matahală de căţea prepelicar roşcovană, cu o turmă de pui schelălăind în jurul ei; câţiva câini mai bântuiau şi alte unghere.
        Apartamentul şi mobila acestui fermier simplu din nord, cu înfăţişare Show full text

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Mihaela Ghiuzeli
This is a great rendition of the tone and style of the original which shows craftsmanship and great understanding of the text. You are a lone but powerful voice in this competition.