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Second ProZ.com Translation Contest 2007

ஆங்கிலம் to Portuguese (EU)


Finalists:3

Source text:

        The floor was of smooth, white stone; the chairs, high-backed, primitive structures, painted green: one or two heavy black ones lurking in the shade. In an arch under the dresser reposed a huge, liver-coloured bitch pointer, surrounded by a swarm of squealing puppies; and other dogs haunted other recesses.
        The apartment and furniture would have been nothing extraordinary as belonging to a homely, northern farmer, with a stubborn countenance, and stalwart limbs set out to advantage in knee-breeches and gaiters. Such an individual seated in his armchair, his mug of ale frothing on the round table before him, is to be seen in any circuit of five or six miles among these hills, if you go at the right time after dinner. But Mr. H forms a singular contrast to his abode and style of living. He is a dark-skinned gipsy in aspect, in dress and manners a gentleman: that is, as much a gentleman as many a country squire: rather slovenly, perhaps, yet not looking amiss with his negligence, because he has an erect and handsome figure; and rather morose. Possibly, some people might suspect him of a degree of underbred pride; I have a sympathetic chord within that tells me it is nothing of the sort: I know, by instinct, his reserve springs from an aversion to showy displays of feeling- to manifestations of mutual kindliness. He'll love and hate equally under cover, and esteem  it a species of impertinence to be loved or hated again. No, I'm running on too fast: I bestow my own  attributes over  liberally on him. Mr. H may have entirely dissimilar reasons for keeping his hand out of the way when he meets a would-be-acquaintance, to those which actuate me. Let me hope my constitution is almost peculiar: my dear mother used to say I should never have a comfortable home; and only last summer I proved myself perfectly unworthy of one.


Entry #614 - Points: 6 - WINNER!
AnaLouro
         O chão era de pedra branca, macia; as cadeiras eram de costas altas e estrutura primitiva printadas de verde, havendo duas pretas pesadas ocultas na sombra. Num arco sob o aparador, repousava uma enorme cadela “pointer” de cor acastanhada, rodeada por uma ninhada de cachorinhos a chiar, havendo mais cães a assombrar outros recantos.
         O apartamento e a mobília não seriam nada de extraordinário, Show full text

mccampello
Pedra "macia"???!!!
mccampello
Desculpe o comentario publico, era para aparecer so para você
Entry #640 - Points: 5
Regina Boltz
O chão era de pedra branca e lisa; as cadeiras com espaldares altos, toscas, pintadas de verde: uma ou duas eram pretas, pesadas e pareciam espreitar por entre as sombras. Em um arco sob o toucador repousava uma enorme cadela pointer, de pelagem fígado, cercada por um bando de filhotes barulhentos; ainda outros cães vagavam pelos cantos.
O apartamento e a mobília não tinham nada de excepcional, pois pertenciam a um simples fazendeiro do norte, de aparência turrona, com braços e pernas fortes, Show full text

Entry #502 - Points: 4
Anonymous
O chão era liso, de pedra branca; as cadeiras, de encosto alto, estrutura primitiva, pintadas de verde, uma ou duas negras pesadas e escondidas à sombra. Em um arco sob a penteadeira repousava uma enorme cadela de caça, pêlos castanhos, cercada por uma multidão de crias de latidos estridentes, além de outros cães que perseguiam outros recessos.

O apartamento e a mobília não seriam nada extraordinários se pertencessem a um fazendeiro caseiro do norte, com um semblante teimoso e membros Show full text

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